It’s April first.
This isn’t a sick joke, it’s my 140 characters or less Twitter Pitch Contest Entry!
I am really sure that I am not kidding. What I am sure of, is that I have less than 4 hours of sleep, a 3 turned 5 hour drive to the Grand Canyon under my belt, and feet that hurt! Though maybe not as bad as posting my work where others can rip it apart. It’s hard for me no matter how many times I do it.
Shelley Watters is having an awesome blog follower contest here:
http://shelleywatters.blogspot.com/2011/03/epic-follower-blogfestcontest.html
You will recall from that one time you were living under a rock.
Now on to the killing of my soul, in very few words.
“Skeletons do regret. Drowning was the easy part. The beautiful but ghastly bones of broken boys & false flesh are now Marlow's whole world.”
My book is a dark, young adult paranormal romance about creatures you have never seen, but that everyone has.
Would you like to help me make it better? I knew you would ;) And don’t forget when you comment (up to one a day) you are entered to win my follower contest!
11 comments :
I think you have nothing to be afraid of! That's a rockin' pitch! :D
I'm hooked! Brilliant!
Wow. It carries the theme well. I like it.
In 140 characters? I don't see much room for improvement there!
Oooooooh!
Wow! Very intriguing!!!
If only there was another word for "skeleton." ;)
“Skeletons do regret. Drowning was the easy part. The beautiful but ghastly bones of broken boys & false flesh are now Marlow's whole world.”
Ooh, this does sound dark. The only thing that bothers me is the mention of regret when there isn't a specific mention of what Marlow actually regrets--dying? Also, I'd like to hear more about the story and what Marlow is up against. Overall,great writing and voice.
This makes me think suicide, so if that's the case, well done, if not it is something to consider. But it piques my interest to know what the regrets are.
It's already very good. Good luck!
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